04-03-2015, 05:10 PM
please decide which one you want to keep the one here or the one in novice?
the most noticable thing for me was the fact that a fair bit of it was alien to me. it could just be me of course and everyone else gets it. the vignettes have no or little connection for me. on their own i like them but i have no point of reference. wish i could have been more use.
the most noticable thing for me was the fact that a fair bit of it was alien to me. it could just be me of course and everyone else gets it. the vignettes have no or little connection for me. on their own i like them but i have no point of reference. wish i could have been more use.
(04-03-2015, 04:50 PM)TimeOut Wrote: Summer in Bed-Stuy
Step on a crack
You'll break mother's
Back a weak opening that feels like a cliched proverb
Chicos
Come eat your hotdogs
Before they get cold
Baby please listen
It's not like I'm selling crack
Like anyone on this block
You got your church clothes
Dirty again
Your abuela is gonna matarte
It's only a year lease baby
And look
We're only steps from the G
Your tio Raul is out today
Seth just texted me about this rooftop party
Please no piensen en ayer
Do I really have to call Raul for our shit,
again?