04-03-2015, 10:35 AM
I particularly liked dale's
"I think that maybe there is the core of a good poem here, so there is reason to not quit on it yet."
And, Ben, we do have a Fun forum for the lighthearted stuff you really don't want to put more work into, tho I think this one would gain from an edit based on some of the crit received here. Even the silly stuuff is worth playing with.
"I think that maybe there is the core of a good poem here, so there is reason to not quit on it yet."
And, Ben, we do have a Fun forum for the lighthearted stuff you really don't want to put more work into, tho I think this one would gain from an edit based on some of the crit received here. Even the silly stuuff is worth playing with.
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