NaPM April 2 2015
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(04-02-2015, 09:07 PM)Erthona Wrote:  Pussy

I've a pet named pussy,
she's dark and she's light,
she constantly wakes me,
throughout the whole night.

       —still—

I'd rather have pussy,
than a rude grouchy wife,
to cuddle me sensually,
throughout my whole life.


Erthona


©2015
ha, good example of the power of the comma. Smile
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NaPM April 2 2015 - by milo - 04-02-2015, 09:53 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-02-2015, 10:38 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by milo - 04-02-2015, 11:30 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by ellajam - 04-02-2015, 11:45 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by billy - 04-02-2015, 05:19 PM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-02-2015, 07:32 PM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by cidermaid - 04-02-2015, 05:57 PM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by jasmine.m.wardiya - 04-02-2015, 06:15 PM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by Erthona - 04-02-2015, 09:07 PM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by ellajam - 04-02-2015, 09:11 PM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by Tiger the Lion - 04-03-2015, 12:02 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by Erthona - 04-03-2015, 12:10 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by ellajam - 04-03-2015, 12:26 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by Todd - 04-03-2015, 06:22 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by just mercedes - 04-03-2015, 07:13 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by milo - 04-03-2015, 09:13 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by shemthepenman - 04-03-2015, 08:16 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by Keith - 04-03-2015, 08:18 AM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by rayheinrich - 04-03-2015, 02:24 PM
RE: NaPM April 2 2015 - by bena - 04-17-2015, 06:04 AM



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