04-02-2015, 09:17 AM
(04-02-2015, 08:40 AM)Erthona Wrote: RayofSunShine, Gee, I am just caught by surprise that you would write something like this, I am just so overwhelmed. Never saw this one coming :pDale, it was my 2nd shot at a Villanelle. I want to try to use this month to familiarize myself with as many forms I can.
ella, Ah yes, when inspiration deserts, we look for solace in corsets. Are you going for a little waste training? (Hrrump, that sounds a bit of a shitty idea.) Oh dear, can I say shitty here, or do I have to ban myself?
Paul, what form is that, I don't have the energy to look it up. It does seem familiar, although I don't recall L1 and L3 being used so often, but the four lines at the end seem familiar. One of those little French ones isn't it?
Remember everyone this is a Merry Throng, not a Splint. Be sure to stretch and eat plenty of oatmeal, and drink at least one half gallon of wine a day!
dale
Paul
