04-01-2015, 05:18 PM
Thanks for running this again milo.
To those who have not given this a try before, I would say give it a go - don't worry about producing a polished poem. If it helps, just think of these as poem starters that you can come back to. I have not written anything new for over six months and today I wrote something, so i am really greatful for the prompt and the kick start.
Here goes day one!
You tricked me with smoke covered glass surfaces;
the fiery sea glowed blue and cool. You prophesied
a self testimony, dreamed up a passion
and painted a portal into my innermost sanctuary;
but every word was a well laid trap,
lies upon lies behind which you could hide.
Shaken and tumbled by your weighty insistence,
I surrendered my precious, virgin mount.
The curtain of my youth was ripped aside;
peace that once rivered through these doors,
was turned to blood, at the touch of a swine flesh.
My love was just a bus stop conquest.
Nice pantoume Mercedes. This poem about really suited the theme for the day and the image. Beautiful images.
To those who have not given this a try before, I would say give it a go - don't worry about producing a polished poem. If it helps, just think of these as poem starters that you can come back to. I have not written anything new for over six months and today I wrote something, so i am really greatful for the prompt and the kick start.
Here goes day one!
You tricked me with smoke covered glass surfaces;
the fiery sea glowed blue and cool. You prophesied
a self testimony, dreamed up a passion
and painted a portal into my innermost sanctuary;
but every word was a well laid trap,
lies upon lies behind which you could hide.
Shaken and tumbled by your weighty insistence,
I surrendered my precious, virgin mount.
The curtain of my youth was ripped aside;
peace that once rivered through these doors,
was turned to blood, at the touch of a swine flesh.
My love was just a bus stop conquest.
Nice pantoume Mercedes. This poem about really suited the theme for the day and the image. Beautiful images.