In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl

[Bananadon]

This is a good insight into misogyny. It's interesting but I really just don't like it. On the whole, it is boring, this man claims he loves the girl but never does anything to 'get her'. He simply believes she loves him too, when she clearly doesn't.
Maybe, if you gave a face to the coffee-shop girl, then I could understand the love. But for now, it remains a mystery. Use more commas