Shore Waves
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(03-31-2015, 11:51 AM)srijantje Wrote:  no,I really meant,why not change the first line to
like white collared nuns
walking
in dark habits

[what habits would they get into?]
I'm playing w/the word "habit"...that's what shore waves do. Not so much "habit" I guess; I'm sure there's a geological term for wave movement, but I chose "habit" as a piece of clothing and a word for what waves do. Call me weird. '

I do like your suggestion of first line, though. Thanks.
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Messages In This Thread
Shore Waves - by 71degrees - 03-29-2015, 07:53 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by ellajam - 03-29-2015, 08:02 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by 71degrees - 03-31-2015, 09:10 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by Tiger the Lion - 03-31-2015, 09:15 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by srijantje - 03-30-2015, 11:43 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by just mercedes - 03-31-2015, 09:16 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by srijantje - 03-31-2015, 11:51 AM
RE: Shore Waves - by 71degrees - 03-31-2015, 10:45 PM



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