Indian Summer

[Tiger the Lion]

Indian Summer

I'm so sorry
I slept so late,
sedated by yesterdays' indifference.

C'mon, 
wake up.
Let's go do something.

Don't care for the "so, so, do" combination. I'd edit all of them.  And I also agree w/Voker about the children's aspect. That's not a bad thing, mind you. It just sounds like something a kid would say. That's why I would be tempted to shorten this even more.  (words to edit: so, so, do, yesterday's, something).  Short and choppy and let's go, let's go makes this exciting to me. Dragging it out w/adverbs bogs it down.

Thanks 71. Just posted an edit to your credit that I hope is more succinct. 
Paul