Scattered Leaves
#7
One of the worst mistakes people make when using rhyme is to just pick a word that fits the scheme and let it twist the poem in a direction that makes no sense, so that it loses any cohesion. If you can't control your rhymes, either change them, get creative with your words or use a different technique.
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Scattered Leaves - by Leanne - 03-29-2015, 06:40 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by Erthona - 03-29-2015, 07:26 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by ellajam - 03-29-2015, 07:35 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by just mercedes - 03-29-2015, 07:35 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by Leanne - 03-29-2015, 07:49 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by billy - 03-29-2015, 08:25 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by Leanne - 03-29-2015, 08:30 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by nakedwonder - 03-29-2015, 09:30 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by billy - 03-29-2015, 07:07 PM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by Leanne - 03-30-2015, 04:47 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by billy - 03-30-2015, 07:16 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by ellajam - 03-30-2015, 05:11 AM
RE: Scattered Leaves - by crow - 03-30-2015, 05:04 PM



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