03-21-2015, 04:47 PM
Thank you all for the feedback. I had thought the last "to" would have been good to add emphasis in the last line - but it seems like it just ruined the rhythm instead. Helpful points!
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To be, Just be - by summermoose - 03-19-2015, 06:53 PM
RE: To be, Just be - by groberts01 - 03-19-2015, 08:56 PM
RE: To be, Just be - by LorettaYoung - 03-20-2015, 05:15 AM
RE: To be, Just be - by billy - 03-20-2015, 04:02 PM
RE: To be, Just be - by Daroma - 03-21-2015, 09:06 AM
RE: To be, Just be - by summermoose - 03-21-2015, 04:47 PM
RE: To be, Just be - by jasmine.m.wardiya - 03-22-2015, 04:36 PM
RE: To be, Just be - by kwokfreya - 03-28-2015, 05:34 PM
RE: To be, Just be - by summermoose - 03-29-2015, 03:33 AM
RE: To be, Just be - by nakedwonder - 03-29-2015, 09:37 AM
RE: To be, Just be - by staciamberdawn - 06-06-2015, 03:04 PM
RE: To be, Just be - by tectak - 06-06-2015, 05:53 PM
RE: To be, Just be - by jasmine+clovers - 06-06-2015, 07:14 PM
RE: To be, Just be - by Sharramon - 08-19-2015, 10:20 AM
RE: To be, Just be - by Misanthrope - 08-19-2015, 04:55 PM
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