march madness
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(03-20-2015, 08:33 AM)entwife Wrote:  march madness

mother nature does
her drip tease
a row of white faces
watch for the sun

I'd thwack that 'the' in the last line.
(Though bouncing the 'for' instead would lend a certain madness that would be hard to discount.)
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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