In delusion born, we die in sorrow - for milo
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If it were a great poem it would be a failure, so thank you Hysterical

I did think the meter thingy was somewhat fun, if not clever. I thought about you and your half foot, club feet are such a damn boor.

Besides, I've quit writing great poems, I found the investment wasn't worth the outcome and no I wasn't thinking it would get me girls. I gave up that idea a long time ago. Hope springs eternal, but my hopes have no springs and the best they can do is hop, or maybe hip-hop. Hope hip-hops 4ever dude.  Thumbsup

Of course the one I worked on more than 2 or 3 minutes, the play, no one seems to have looked at. I guess there are just too many words to read Sad

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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RE: In delusion born, we die in sorrow - for milo - by Erthona - 03-18-2015, 02:53 PM



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