03-18-2015, 07:14 AM
I love the wanderlust message your putting out through your poem, but I agree with the sentences being too long. Try shorter ones, the flow will go a lot smoother.
I also feel that the first two stamzas were really good, and had a good push; but throughout the poem it started to lose that push.
Other than that, great poem!
I also feel that the first two stamzas were really good, and had a good push; but throughout the poem it started to lose that push.
Other than that, great poem!