It ain't po-etiquette
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(03-17-2015, 12:46 PM)slave Wrote:  Good poem, but the line "suffering from vertigo" didn't seem to go in the same beat as the rest of the poem. Perhaps I'm reading it all wrong.
Also, am I supposed to give feedback here or is that for a different forum?
Ozzies stress the "-ings"

Probably leads to all sorts of mental issues
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It ain't po-etiquette - by Leanne - 03-13-2015, 02:46 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by rayheinrich - 03-13-2015, 03:50 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Erthona - 03-13-2015, 05:53 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Brownlie - 03-14-2015, 12:38 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Erthona - 03-14-2015, 04:14 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leanne - 03-14-2015, 05:59 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leah S. - 03-16-2015, 05:06 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leanne - 03-17-2015, 04:18 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by billy - 03-17-2015, 10:33 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leah S. - 03-17-2015, 12:26 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by slave - 03-17-2015, 12:46 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by billy - 03-17-2015, 12:51 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by milo - 03-17-2015, 12:54 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Erthona - 03-17-2015, 12:52 PM



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