03-17-2015, 12:54 PM
(03-17-2015, 12:46 PM)slave Wrote: Good poem, but the line "suffering from vertigo" didn't seem to go in the same beat as the rest of the poem. Perhaps I'm reading it all wrong.Ozzies stress the "-ings"
Also, am I supposed to give feedback here or is that for a different forum?
Probably leads to all sorts of mental issues

