It ain't po-etiquette

It ain't po-etiquette

slave
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03-17-2015, 12:46 PM

Good poem, but the line "suffering from vertigo" didn't seem to go in the same beat as the rest of the poem. Perhaps I'm reading it all wrong.
Also, am I supposed to give feedback here or is that for a different forum?

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It ain't po-etiquette - by Leanne - 03-13-2015, 02:46 PM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by rayheinrich - 03-13-2015, 03:50 PM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Erthona - 03-13-2015, 05:53 PM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Brownlie - 03-14-2015, 12:38 AM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Erthona - 03-14-2015, 04:14 AM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leanne - 03-14-2015, 05:59 AM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leah S. - 03-16-2015, 05:06 AM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leanne - 03-17-2015, 04:18 AM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by billy - 03-17-2015, 10:33 AM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leah S. - 03-17-2015, 12:26 PM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by slave - 03-17-2015, 12:46 PM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by billy - 03-17-2015, 12:51 PM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by milo - 03-17-2015, 12:54 PM

RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Erthona - 03-17-2015, 12:52 PM

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