03-15-2015, 11:41 AM
(03-15-2015, 10:12 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:Thank you, Paul. "lips'"...you're probably right, just didn't look right to me.(03-15-2015, 09:48 AM)71degrees Wrote: Love it!Warm sentiment conveyed with cold words. Well done.
It is so cold
this day her lips - shouldn't this be lip's or lips' ?
imprint freezes
on my cheek
I rub it
for luck
Paul

