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Fathers and Sons
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03-14-2015, 10:14 AM
This is beautiful! I really like how you have used words like 'the thinning soles of his boots' to let us know he's hard working but perhaps financially struggling and 'fading like the old road' to let us know he's dying. It's very subtle and lends the work a beautiful whimsical feel.
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Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 01-13-2015, 03:58 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Lucifer - 01-13-2015, 01:14 PM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Kubla Khan - 01-13-2015, 04:31 PM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Grace - 01-14-2015, 02:51 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by ellz483 - 02-05-2015, 03:55 PM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Norimeknowreason - 02-08-2015, 10:29 PM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 02-14-2015, 02:31 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Mitul Yadav - 02-14-2015, 03:18 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 02-25-2015, 05:06 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Persephone - 03-14-2015, 10:14 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Julius - 03-05-2016, 05:28 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Ashok1 - 03-06-2016, 12:55 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 03-08-2016, 01:24 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by DC Black - 03-18-2016, 09:52 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 03-22-2016, 01:44 AM
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