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It ain't po-etiquette
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03-14-2015, 12:38 AM
Well, you've definitely reworked an anonymous verse and decked it so to say. There is an unpacking of the fart here. I wouldn't use gathered round because of the redunancy, but I'd love to see this on a bathroom wall. It's a twenty to one shot I would find something to critique.
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It ain't po-etiquette - by Leanne - 03-13-2015, 02:46 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by rayheinrich - 03-13-2015, 03:50 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Erthona - 03-13-2015, 05:53 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Brownlie - 03-14-2015, 12:38 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Erthona - 03-14-2015, 04:14 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leanne - 03-14-2015, 05:59 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leah S. - 03-16-2015, 05:06 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leanne - 03-17-2015, 04:18 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by billy - 03-17-2015, 10:33 AM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Leah S. - 03-17-2015, 12:26 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by slave - 03-17-2015, 12:46 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by billy - 03-17-2015, 12:51 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by milo - 03-17-2015, 12:54 PM
RE: It ain't po-etiquette - by Erthona - 03-17-2015, 12:52 PM
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