A Modest Proposal (Meter Discussion)
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Quote:Ican wrote: "But Milo, and Billy, and Erthona: isn't Common Meter defined not simply as 4-3-4-3, but rather 4 iambs, 3 iambs, 4 iambs, 3 iambs?"

I believe I already spoke to that earlier.

Quote:Erthona wrote: "The first stanza is in common meter. Alternating lines of iambic tetrameter and iambic trimeter with an ABAB rhyme pattern."

Maybe you should actually try reading what has been written, rather than being so focused on trying to defend yourself. This is a site for improving your poetry. However that is impossible if the writer takes an adversarial attitude towards critique. If all you want is praise, there are plenty of vanity poetry sites around where you will never have to contend with negative feedback again.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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A Modest Proposal (Meter Discussion) - by lacan123 - 03-12-2015, 02:54 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by rayheinrich - 03-12-2015, 03:18 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by Brownlie - 03-12-2015, 03:25 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by Erthona - 03-12-2015, 04:57 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by rayheinrich - 03-13-2015, 10:18 AM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by fromcancertocapricorn - 03-13-2015, 11:31 AM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by lacan123 - 03-13-2015, 12:11 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by milo - 03-13-2015, 12:53 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by ellajam - 03-13-2015, 04:57 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by lacan123 - 03-13-2015, 01:32 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by milo - 03-13-2015, 01:56 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by rayheinrich - 03-13-2015, 01:38 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by billy - 03-13-2015, 02:31 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by Leanne - 03-13-2015, 02:54 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by lacan123 - 03-13-2015, 03:10 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by Erthona - 03-13-2015, 05:50 PM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by milo - 03-14-2015, 12:09 AM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by lacan123 - 03-14-2015, 12:52 AM
RE: A Modest Proposal - by tectak - 03-14-2015, 03:16 AM
RE: A Modest Proposal (Meter Discussion) - by lacan123 - 03-14-2015, 08:33 AM
RE: A Modest Proposal (Meter Discussion) - by lacan123 - 03-14-2015, 09:56 AM
RE: A Modest Proposal (Meter Discussion) - by lacan123 - 03-14-2015, 10:36 AM
RE: A Modest Proposal (Meter Discussion) - by lacan123 - 03-14-2015, 10:55 AM
RE: A Modest Proposal (Meter Discussion) - by lacan123 - 03-14-2015, 03:10 PM



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