03-12-2015, 12:42 PM
this reads as a cleave poem (can be googled)
the problem i have is this, i see the poem as literal and as such the child grows in the egg.
the lip shows me it's not really magpies. not sure why rude screens either. wish i could say more re feedback.
no one is more beautiful
and
biting your lip
are out and out cliche
the problem i have is this, i see the poem as literal and as such the child grows in the egg.
the lip shows me it's not really magpies. not sure why rude screens either. wish i could say more re feedback.
no one is more beautiful
and
biting your lip
are out and out cliche