03-12-2015, 09:55 AM
(03-12-2015, 06:14 AM)first_high_of_the_day Wrote: What I liked:columns?
The sound of the poem was quite beautiful. Splitting the poem into three columns was unique and purposeful (not cliche).
What I didn't like:
While I felt the emotions you were trying to convey, the thoughts representing these emotions were mostly cheap and shallow. A line like, "no one is more beautiful" comes across as more of an insult than a compliment. As if you couldn't find the time of day to think of some words for her, so you just went with what everyone else says.
check the meaning of rude?