03-11-2015, 01:47 PM
Hey Billy, thanks a lot for your quick feedback, I found it very helpful. I went back and edited the original posting with the changes I made to stanza #2 (contradictions) and #31(just bad)... I also tried to iron out the rhythm a little better in some other parts. I'd love to hear what you think of the adjustments and any other critique you might have since your initial response was so helpful. Thanks again and looking forward to posting more poems and critiques of my own.