It's gone again
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This poem was pleasantly simple. I felt that it reflected the feelings of one when forgetful. I liked the rhyming as well.

The title was intriguing. It hooks me in, wondering, what is "gone again"?

Good.
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It's gone again - by tomcrocus - 02-23-2015, 04:45 AM
RE: It's gone again - by Namyh - 03-01-2015, 12:50 AM
RE: It's gone again - by summermoose - 03-05-2015, 08:32 AM
RE: It's gone again - by onegirlonepen - 03-10-2015, 12:54 PM
RE: It's gone again - by bena - 03-10-2015, 01:45 PM
RE: It's gone again - by Leah S. - 03-10-2015, 02:09 PM
RE: It's gone again - by tomcrocus - 04-13-2015, 02:46 AM



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