03-06-2015, 03:47 AM
ambrosial revelation,
Thank you for the feedback. I am just starting out and have a lot to learn. I was not aware of the 10 syllable count in the Haiku.
Is there a line structure that needs to be followed (number of lines and or syllables per line) ?
Based on your information I reworked and came up with this:
Osprey
sailing aloft
captured my heart
Nice avatar,
John
Thank you for the feedback. I am just starting out and have a lot to learn. I was not aware of the 10 syllable count in the Haiku.
Is there a line structure that needs to be followed (number of lines and or syllables per line) ?
Based on your information I reworked and came up with this:
Osprey
sailing aloft
captured my heart
Nice avatar,
John