3-3-15 'Ku
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hats and mittens
drying on the radiator,
the smell of cocoa

The plurals hug you with family, friends, a sense of life shared.
I love the perfect Trochaic feet of the first two lines which,
when they end, create a natural pivot.

It's beautiful.
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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3-3-15 'Ku - by Tiger the Lion - 03-04-2015, 04:11 AM
RE: 3-3-15 'Ku - by Magpie - 03-04-2015, 12:48 PM
RE: 3-3-15 'Ku - by Tiger the Lion - 03-04-2015, 12:57 PM
RE: 3-3-15 'Ku - by srijantje - 03-04-2015, 01:16 PM
RE: 3-3-15 'Ku - by rayheinrich - 03-04-2015, 02:06 PM
RE: 3-3-15 'Ku - by Tiger the Lion - 03-04-2015, 02:15 PM



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