The Snowman

The Snowman

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03-03-2015, 06:06 AM

Hello Yun,

Congrats on a fun short poem that flowed off the tongue nicely.

My only issue after reading it several times is that witches wand seems to conflict with my image of a guardian master snowman.

Take care,
John

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The Snowman - by Rogue Yun - 03-02-2015, 06:00 AM

RE: The Snowman - by ellajam - 03-02-2015, 07:45 AM

RE: The Snowman - by Rogue Yun - 03-02-2015, 08:12 AM

RE: The Snowman - by ellajam - 03-02-2015, 08:15 AM

RE: The Snowman - by BelialNaoe - 03-02-2015, 10:58 AM

RE: The Snowman - by just mercedes - 03-02-2015, 12:13 PM

RE: The Snowman - by Tiger the Lion - 03-02-2015, 03:31 PM

RE: The Snowman - by Deadrise - 03-03-2015, 06:06 AM

RE: The Snowman - by SameName - 03-03-2015, 11:13 AM

RE: The Snowman - by jasmine.m.wardiya - 03-08-2015, 08:17 AM

RE: The Snowman - by Persephone - 03-14-2015, 10:20 AM

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