03-02-2015, 04:31 AM
To me as a normal person reading this, I find it complicated. I'm lost in exactly what you're trying to say because of your usage of words that are not common, such as "synaptic", apocryphal", "nether". I personally would have to grab a dictionary to see exactly what you're trying to say. You also say "during our youth". Are you speaking of two or more of you? Who are those other "our youth" people? Otherwise, I think you are well educated, but if you are trying to reach the masses with the understanding of this, I would make it more simple for the layman...