think you've played around with the format since i last read this (and no i can't remember where) the rhyme scheme certainly does but your forms are always nigh spot on; no surprise there.
it works for me, it reads as a tapestry of very special person who is connected to the narrator.
you changed the format on me you twat
i think it more fits the form as it is than as it was.
it works for me, it reads as a tapestry of very special person who is connected to the narrator.
you changed the format on me you twat
i think it more fits the form as it is than as it was.