A Hot Pink Crayon (revision #2)

[Leanne]

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The Hot Pink Crayon

The doctor gave to me the small blue pills and
white orange caps, and promised that they’d fix
my broken parts. What all my life they thought
I’d need – to take the crayons, and color in the
lines. Allowance in fluorescent pills — which I
spent on papers, but not drawings.
 
The doctor took from me 
    a spectacular 
            spectrum
                of colors!
Electric and vivid, mingling together, pulsing and vibrating, creating an anthem or a lullaby
a feeling so profoundly joyous and melancholy that neither raucous laughter nor silent tears suit it
the smell of a vermillion rose and the tender sore from her thorn
laughing sincerely, loving childishly
skidding a hot pink crayon across the coloring book