02-27-2015, 01:29 AM
(02-18-2015, 01:30 PM)just mercedes Wrote: edit"jerk by"....the "jerk" part I like, the "by" is not what butterflies do. How about "comply" (if you need to keep the rhyme bumps)? Just a thought...I do like the edit version.
white butterflies jerk by
as if forgetting
how to fly
white butterflies jerk by
as if they keep forgetting
how to fly

