white butterflies

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white butterflies jerk by
as if forgetting
how to fly






white butterflies jerk by
as if they keep forgetting
how to fly

"jerk by"....the "jerk" part I like, the "by" is not what butterflies do. How about "comply" (if you need to keep the rhyme bumps)? Just a thought...I do like the edit version.