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Montana
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02-25-2015, 07:50 AM
I like the story aspect with the search for the missing daughter. What happens from this point on? What are you trying to say by relating this story? I find it very difficult to follow due to the constantly changing meter. I would work on consistent meter which will help improve the flow. Thanks for posting.
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RE: Montana - by billy - 02-23-2015, 09:33 AM
RE: Montana - by kreichert - 02-25-2015, 07:50 AM
RE: Montana - by Bunx - 02-26-2015, 12:34 AM
RE: Montana - by alatos - 02-26-2015, 03:24 AM
RE: Montana - by indarican - 02-27-2015, 04:22 AM
RE: Montana - by hopefularahant - 02-27-2015, 01:17 PM
RE: Montana - by tectak - 02-28-2015, 01:15 AM
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