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Ode to Asperger's (Revision 2)

Ode to Asperger's (Revision 2)
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02-24-2015, 10:52 AM
I pretty much go along with mercedes' technical critique; it's the diagnosis that bothers me.

You're describing "attention deficit disorder", not "Asperger syndrome".
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Ode to Asperger's (Revision 2) - by Leah S. - 02-24-2015, 09:58 AM
RE: Ode to Asperger's (first draft) - by just mercedes - 02-24-2015, 10:34 AM
RE: Ode to Asperger's (first draft) - by rayheinrich - 02-24-2015, 10:52 AM
RE: Ode to Asperger's (Revision 2) - by TimeOut - 04-23-2015, 05:44 PM
RE: Ode to Asperger's (first draft) - by Leah S. - 02-24-2015, 11:04 AM
RE: Ode to Asperger's (Revised) - by rayheinrich - 02-25-2015, 07:18 AM
RE: Ode to Asperger's (Revised) - by Leah S. - 02-26-2015, 01:00 AM
RE: Ode to Asperger's (Revised) - by Leanne - 02-27-2015, 05:21 AM
RE: Ode to Asperger's (Revision 2) - by Leah S. - 03-01-2015, 03:04 AM
RE: Ode to Asperger's (Revision 2) - by Todd - 04-04-2015, 06:24 AM



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