Stone
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(02-20-2015, 05:50 PM)cidermaid Wrote:  Hi,
I see this more as prose writing.
But that is not to say that it is not some material to make it a poem Smile
Rather than offering crit I have highlighted the lines / words that carried some weight of image / meaning for me.
Thank you so much for reading it and offering feedback!!!!
Just to clarify, what would one apply to a writing like this in order to classify it as a poem? Meter, yeah?
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Stone - by leftovernachos - 02-20-2015, 12:59 PM
RE: Stone - by cidermaid - 02-20-2015, 05:50 PM
RE: Stone - by leftovernachos - 02-21-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: Stone - by cidermaid - 02-21-2015, 07:33 AM
RE: Stone - by Erthona - 02-21-2015, 03:46 PM
RE: Stone - by billy - 02-21-2015, 04:31 PM
RE: Stone - by billy - 02-21-2015, 04:35 PM
RE: Stone - by Vigilante Mugshot - 02-26-2015, 09:23 AM
RE: Stone - by JGmusic512 - 03-10-2015, 09:03 AM



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