Pardon Me, My Pages Burn

[mongolfiere]

I have a lot of really great things I could say about this piece. I had to read the lines "You breathed down my spine, / You turned the page to her," over and over because they're just really good. The only problem I had while reading it was the drastic change from beautifully described "rancid chapter 13" to "You know what? I have feelings. But f*ck me, I'm a book, right? I had material wishes!" I think I was so caught up in your diction that this one section tore me from it and after that it was kind of heard to get back into the flow of your words.

Other than that, I really enjoyed this poem! Keep up the good work!

- mongolfiere