Pardon Me, My Pages Burn
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Thank you, indarican, for taking out time and helping me out here....i too felt that the poem could use some verses less, but till now, i have not found a way to de-clutter and still keep the message unambiguous. That said, i will try and make some verses less clunky and that too without losing the clarity. Thanks Smile
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Pardon Me, My Pages Burn - by Mitul Yadav - 02-19-2015, 11:49 PM
RE: Pardon Me, My Pages Burn - by indarican - 02-20-2015, 03:15 AM
RE: Pardon Me, My Pages Burn - by Mitul Yadav - 02-20-2015, 03:50 AM
RE: Pardon Me, My Pages Burn - by mongolfiere - 02-20-2015, 02:44 PM
RE: Pardon Me, My Pages Burn - by Mitul Yadav - 02-20-2015, 11:30 PM



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