02-19-2015, 10:40 PM
Hi, deadrise, inTO is problematic, I go INto the the house. This is exactly the kind of error I make all the time, it is so easy to hear it as correct, but if you isolate the word it is poetic wishful thinking, something I indulge in myself way too often. 
I'm a beginner at this but I think I'm correct in this case.
Oh, and I'd prefer the title Blue Heron or something else, I don't mind googling at all but I don't know what you gain by making the title a different language than the poem.
I'm a beginner at this but I think I'm correct in this case.Oh, and I'd prefer the title Blue Heron or something else, I don't mind googling at all but I don't know what you gain by making the title a different language than the poem.
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