02-19-2015, 07:53 AM
(02-19-2015, 06:31 AM)monmac Wrote: The edit version works better. The image is good as l know exactly what u mean can see it now. It is like they are just learning to fly. So I was going to suggest
As if learning
But me thinks forget id probably better
Did u mean a small aba rhyme?
I don't like rhyme in haiku but couldn't avoid it here.
