I Stole For You
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(02-12-2015, 12:04 PM)Norimeknowreason Wrote:  I stole red roses from the neighbor's garden to give to you (Maybe change To give to you - for you, I feel like the flow is off)
but you threw all those red roses away.
Now I'm left broken-hearted and my neighbor and I,
we haven't spoken in days. (I think the we can be omitted)
This poem makes me want to know more. I was straight to the point and fresh. I have only read it once and its already stuck in my head. Very nicely done.
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I Stole For You - by Norimeknowreason - 02-12-2015, 12:04 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by pmmurphy - 02-12-2015, 12:45 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Norimeknowreason - 02-12-2015, 01:54 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Tiger the Lion - 02-12-2015, 02:31 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Mitul Yadav - 02-13-2015, 03:44 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by starsman - 02-13-2015, 02:10 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Norimeknowreason - 02-14-2015, 02:45 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by Erthona - 02-14-2015, 04:54 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by Magnum - 02-18-2015, 09:03 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by indarican - 02-19-2015, 07:07 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by Cthonian - 02-20-2015, 02:40 AM



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