Planet Dance
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Hello samantha susan,
i've read it and read it and i can't help thinking that's a song jumping out at me and this is my take on it.


There's something interstellar about you
it's in the way you move
and you allways look to the galaxys edge
when someone else might disapprove
there's starlight caught in your eyes
i love the way you move
two planets,two worlds collide
who cares i don't disapprove

etc. etc. etc.

it's a nice piece of poetry samantha,that's just my take on it,
best wishes,
tom.
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Planet Dance - by Samantha Susan - 12-11-2014, 12:35 PM
RE: Planet Dance - by Erthona - 12-11-2014, 02:39 PM
RE: Planet Dance - by Samantha Susan - 12-11-2014, 03:13 PM
RE: Planet Dance - by Norimeknowreason - 02-13-2015, 06:36 AM
RE: Planet Dance - by starsman - 02-13-2015, 01:26 PM
RE: Planet Dance - by Deadrise - 02-16-2015, 01:44 AM
RE: Planet Dance - by tomcrocus - 02-16-2015, 01:25 PM



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