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02-16-2015, 03:40 AM
Thanks for the feedback cidermaid! I took alot of your suggestions. I kept stanza 6 but trimmed down the details to make the poem seem more universal. I also trimmed down the wordy language. Glad you liked it. Hopefully I think the edit is definitely more to the point.
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monotone mandatory - by Bunx - 02-14-2015, 05:19 AM
RE: monotone mandatory - by cidermaid - 02-16-2015, 12:56 AM
RE: monotone mandatory - by Bunx - 02-16-2015, 03:40 AM
RE: monotone mandatory - by Magnum - 02-18-2015, 10:22 AM
RE: monotone mandatory - by Bunx - 02-18-2015, 12:19 PM
RE: monotone mandatory - by Magnum - 02-18-2015, 02:51 PM
RE: monotone mandatory - by Bunx - 02-19-2015, 12:10 AM
RE: monotone mandatory - by indarican - 02-19-2015, 06:39 AM
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