She Falls
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Last S, lays should be lies.

Very interesting construction, and imagery throughout is striking in realism. I enjoy the murky stuff that crawls around the recesses of society, so this is pretty much in my playhouse.

Just stopping by, may need to read a couple more to get to where I might comment on it more thoroughly, but overall a strong debut.

bena
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She Falls - by fromcancertocapricorn - 02-14-2015, 05:57 AM
RE: She Falls - by ellajam - 02-14-2015, 09:39 PM
RE: She Falls - by bena - 02-16-2015, 01:04 AM
RE: She Falls - by mongolfiere - 02-17-2015, 11:32 AM
RE: She Falls - by Leah S. - 02-20-2015, 05:58 AM



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