Fathers and Sons

[Mitul Yadav]

A beautiful piece! This was more about the thought and less about the physical and aesthetic form it took to be a poem, a fine one at that. There were instances of forced rhymes and some parts could use rephrasing (see the 'knights' part.). Particularly hair-rising was the part with the coincedence of a river flowing parallel to the 'path of concrete plan'. This is what life is. It just happens.
All in a ll, a great write. Cheers!