02-14-2015, 02:45 AM
I stole for you, red roses,
from the neighbor's garden.
You threw those roses away.
now I'm left with a broken heart
and my neighbor and I, well,
we still haven't spoken in days.
Thanks so much for all the critiques. I'll take each in one in consideration
Another attempt.
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from the neighbor's garden.
You threw those roses away.
now I'm left with a broken heart
and my neighbor and I, well,
we still haven't spoken in days.
Thanks so much for all the critiques. I'll take each in one in consideration
Another attempt.
.

