I Stole For You
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I stole for you, red roses,
from the neighbor's garden.
You threw those roses away.
now I'm left with a broken heart  
and my neighbor and I, well,
we still haven't spoken in days.  
                    Thanks so much for all the critiques. I'll take each in one in consideration
                                                                 Another attempt. Smile.
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Messages In This Thread
I Stole For You - by Norimeknowreason - 02-12-2015, 12:04 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by pmmurphy - 02-12-2015, 12:45 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Norimeknowreason - 02-12-2015, 01:54 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Tiger the Lion - 02-12-2015, 02:31 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Mitul Yadav - 02-13-2015, 03:44 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by starsman - 02-13-2015, 02:10 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Norimeknowreason - 02-14-2015, 02:45 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by Erthona - 02-14-2015, 04:54 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by Magnum - 02-18-2015, 09:03 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by indarican - 02-19-2015, 07:07 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by Cthonian - 02-20-2015, 02:40 AM



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