02-12-2015, 02:31 PM
I agree with murphy. I think you can say this with more brevity. I think you have a decent idea for a poem. If you can find a way to say it in half as many words it could be a strong short poem.
Paul
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I Stole For You - by Norimeknowreason - 02-12-2015, 12:04 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by pmmurphy - 02-12-2015, 12:45 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Norimeknowreason - 02-12-2015, 01:54 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Tiger the Lion - 02-12-2015, 02:31 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Mitul Yadav - 02-13-2015, 03:44 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by starsman - 02-13-2015, 02:10 PM
RE: I Stole For You - by Norimeknowreason - 02-14-2015, 02:45 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by Erthona - 02-14-2015, 04:54 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by Magnum - 02-18-2015, 09:03 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by indarican - 02-19-2015, 07:07 AM
RE: I Stole For You - by Cthonian - 02-20-2015, 02:40 AM
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