02-12-2015, 12:26 PM
Has it totally empathic < The first thing I want to change when I read this is this line . I
it's gloroius and tragic want to change it to ," Has it totally become empathic," or " Is it totally empathic"
doesn't matter the traffic
I have it
it's telepathic
runs through my veins like magic
I don't stop
lemmie have it < lemmie have it , you are asking for it here, but you say "it runs through, my veins like magic"
I eat it up like candy If you are telepathic, no one would have to " let you have it", you'd already own it.
knowledge is food
it makes me randy
don't mean to be gettin' graphic
sorry for the pose
I should'a have some manners I s'pose < here the have bothers me . "I should'a have some manners I s'pose." Should'a
f'kit, creation includes everything (should have) . Is this saying "have" twice. I should'a had
that's just how it goes
realignin' the universe
I sing
I know it can hurt
a sting
but that's just me
a King
it's mine I made it
free to rearrange it
you don't like it?
I'l help ya..
to leave it
ya betta
b'lieve it!
it's gloroius and tragic want to change it to ," Has it totally become empathic," or " Is it totally empathic"
doesn't matter the traffic
I have it
it's telepathic
runs through my veins like magic
I don't stop
lemmie have it < lemmie have it , you are asking for it here, but you say "it runs through, my veins like magic"
I eat it up like candy If you are telepathic, no one would have to " let you have it", you'd already own it.
knowledge is food
it makes me randy
don't mean to be gettin' graphic
sorry for the pose
I should'a have some manners I s'pose < here the have bothers me . "I should'a have some manners I s'pose." Should'a
f'kit, creation includes everything (should have) . Is this saying "have" twice. I should'a had
that's just how it goes
realignin' the universe
I sing
I know it can hurt
a sting
but that's just me
a King
it's mine I made it
free to rearrange it
you don't like it?
I'l help ya..
to leave it
ya betta
b'lieve it!

