02-12-2015, 09:30 AM
Thank you both for your time and suggestions. I have always been bad about using too many words.
I think I write more short story poems. But oddly the next one I am posting is only 4 lines long. lol I will use some of you ideas too! Thanks again.
I think I write more short story poems. But oddly the next one I am posting is only 4 lines long. lol I will use some of you ideas too! Thanks again.

