Has it

[fromcancertocapricorn]

Has it totally empathic
it's gloroius and tragic
doesn't matter the traffic
I have it
it's telepathic
runs through my veins like magic
I don't stop
lemmie have it
I eat it up like candy
knowledge is food
it makes me randy
don't mean to be gettin' graphic
sorry for the pose
I should'a have some manners I s'pose
f'kit, creation includes everything
that's just how it goes
realignin' the universe
I sing
I know it can hurt
a sting
but that's just me
a King
it's mine I made it
free to rearrange it
you don't like it?
I'l help ya..
to leave it
ya betta
b'lieve it!

In general I think you're overemphasizing the rhythm of your poetry. To be honest, it sounds like a rap, which would be great and all, this just isn't a rap forum. I think there is something there in this poem, it just falls victim to poor rhymes like randy and candy. Also "ya betta b'lieve it!" is an amazingly dull cliche, in general I would avoid it.