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Mighty Meteroid
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02-11-2015, 03:39 AM
Before i give my feedback i must say that i have never read a poem like that before. excellent use of vocabulary and imagery i really felt the energy of this poem while i was reading it. If i were to give critique i would suggest using more familiar words, not everyone knows what a "warteous Dactyl" is but then again you shouldnt water down your work for anyone.
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Mighty Meteroid - by Leah S. - 02-03-2015, 02:50 AM
RE: Mighty Meteroid - by kingsosa - 02-11-2015, 03:39 AM
RE: Mighty Meteroid - by Leah S. - 02-12-2015, 09:06 AM
RE: Mighty Meteroid - by just mercedes - 02-12-2015, 09:10 AM
RE: Mighty Meteroid - by Leah S. - 02-12-2015, 09:17 AM
RE: Mighty Meteroid - by Erthona - 02-13-2015, 06:43 PM
RE: Mighty Meteroid - by Leah S. - 02-20-2015, 08:16 AM
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