02-05-2015, 10:26 PM
Edit #1 (billy, chris)
Securely planted, deep in place
foundation pinned to granite ledge,
attached onto the mountain face
securely planted deep. In place
of freedom, settled in its space,
an eaglet with no urge to fledge,
securely planted, deep in place,
foundation pinned to granite ledge.
Original
Securely planted, deep in place
atop a solid granite ledge,
attached into the mountain face
securely planted deep. In place
of freedom, settled in its space,
an eaglet with no urge to fledge,
securely planted, deep in place,
atop a solid granite ledge.
Securely planted, deep in place
foundation pinned to granite ledge,
attached onto the mountain face
securely planted deep. In place
of freedom, settled in its space,
an eaglet with no urge to fledge,
securely planted, deep in place,
foundation pinned to granite ledge.
Original
Securely planted, deep in place
atop a solid granite ledge,
attached into the mountain face
securely planted deep. In place
of freedom, settled in its space,
an eaglet with no urge to fledge,
securely planted, deep in place,
atop a solid granite ledge.
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