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Fathers and Sons
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02-05-2015, 03:55 PM
Good read! The previous posts caught all the things that seemed out of place to me when I looked this over. You definitely helped your readers establish a strong sense about the characters and motivations of the father. I think the title would benefit by being made more specific to this poem; rather than "Fathers and Sons," it could be just "Father and Sons." In the stanzas you only discuss the dealings of one man and his family.
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Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 01-13-2015, 03:58 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Lucifer - 01-13-2015, 01:14 PM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Kubla Khan - 01-13-2015, 04:31 PM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Grace - 01-14-2015, 02:51 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by ellz483 - 02-05-2015, 03:55 PM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Norimeknowreason - 02-08-2015, 10:29 PM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 02-14-2015, 02:31 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Mitul Yadav - 02-14-2015, 03:18 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 02-25-2015, 05:06 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Persephone - 03-14-2015, 10:14 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Julius - 03-05-2016, 05:28 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Ashok1 - 03-06-2016, 12:55 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 03-08-2016, 01:24 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by DC Black - 03-18-2016, 09:52 AM
RE: Fathers and Sons - by Bunx - 03-22-2016, 01:44 AM
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